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The Shedding of Needs by ~VanComic:iconVanComic:



I have just witnessed a killer
Let lies drip from their heart
And let the mouth of the bastard speak
To speak an encrypted brood
But I find myself crippling
At the eyes of their heart
My blood unsheathes its blade to tear my once hopeful veins
This killer will only shed for the future
©2007-2009 ~VanComic
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Morbid... I guess.

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:iconshadowwalker1013:
Damn this is good. Morbid indeed, and that's a good thing. Nice hook at the end.

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Oppression, quiet and Repressed
Swept under the seams
the bed of the acquiesced
where we sleep, insomniac dreams
:iconvancomic:
Morbid seems to be a style of mine now. I'm glad you like the end. I was a bit iffy on it.

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"Just when you make your way back home
I find some time to be alone
I go to see the place once more
Just like a thousands nights before"-When The Smoke Is Going Down

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